Please review this website and my English.

Dr. McKay

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Why you are adding too many categories while you don't have any posts for them.
The content for the homepage is a thing need to improved at this time.
 

kevinhng86

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Why you are adding too many categories while you don't have any posts for them.
The content for the homepage is a thing need to improved at this time.
Thank you Dr. McKay for reviewing my website,

I am just trying to demonstrating to the author when they are signing up for my site. They can write contents for though categories.

The image of logo is blurred , please fix it. You will need to resize that image actually.

English seems good but have some grammatical mistakes , rest is fine.
Thank you 24x7CSM,

I will try to fix the logo, I have to edit that through the theme. I think they hard coded into the theme.
 

iamgaurav

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I would highly suggest you use another theme mainly because this one isn't responsive at all. Secondly, you might want to optimize your website https://gtmetrix.com/reports/www.iblog.website/otUCxZZx

Having a responsive and fast website is something that Google prefer's to see in a website. Also, you can install W3 Total Cache plugin to help you in the optimization.
 

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kevinhng86,

Your English is very, very good, but there are still mistakes that native speakers or people with more advanced English skills will quickly notice. If you want to make a very solid impression, there is nothing that can beat having a professional proofreader look at your site. Here are some mistakes that I noticed in first 60 seconds:
-was establish and found by Kevin-->was established and founded by Kevin
-Iblog.website was build surrounding--> was built
-connecting readers to contents -->connecting readers to content ("Content" is almost always used as a singular noun". I would suggesting adding an adjective here like "quality".
-vast amount of contents that are diversity in subject. -->vast amounts of contect that are diverse in subject.
-to attract the extra visibility --> to attact extra visibility
When you create a new site, consider how important it is for the English to be correct. If this is important to you, my advice is to hire a professional. --Katie
 
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