Hi dlane1987, I took a long look at the content. On the homepage, it's not really clear why you have "kid" in quotes. It looks like you are trying to be a bit sarcastic here somehow, like maybe they are not really kids. But this would probably hurt your cause. If the kids are seen more as adults, they may seem old enough to take care of themselfs. Also on the homepage, I think it would be nicer to have your mission statement first before your executive summary. That way, if someone who wanted to donate came here first, they could quickly read what your abuot without getting lost in the details of your executive summary, etc. There is also one typo (an apostrophe on Kids' under "1.1 Aim"). I would also recommend calling this section "Aims" since there is more than one aim.
Some of the connections weren't always clear. For example, in the blog, what does the 3 Peaks challenge have to do with your Help the Kids? (Make this connection clear in the blog description so people have an idea _before_ clicking on the link.) Under "Help the Kids FAQ" and "Who are home-based educators", your table has been lost, possibly by copying and pasting it instead of formating it properly.
I saw in your gallery that you don't currently have any photos, but it would really help to add images throughout the site. And it might be useful to have an official logo if you plan on running this charity for a longer time. This will make your organization more recognizable and may make the purpose of the charity (education/home education) clearer since "Help the Kids" could mean all sorts of charitable assistance for kids.
That was a lot of criticism, but overall, I found the site to be really nice and the content to be written on a very professional level! Well done! --Katie, Marketing
