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dlane1987

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Were you able to find your way around & how was the navigation?
Did you get what the site is about?
Is the content any good or junk? (I think its good but thats why I need you guys I can't seperate myself from being the writer)
What things would you like to see on this site to make it easier to use?

Dans Passive Income

Thanks in advance
 

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Wow your website is extremely slow! That took more than 30-40 seconds to load up... So for sure many people will give up before waiting that long... Once I got there and being blunt about it:

1) The website theme, layout is very basic. It almost completely lacks any graphics and sorry to say does not look appealing from first impressions... You can easily fix that with using a professional theme which does not cost much these days... Just realized that a lot of your items have not loaded correctly hence the display does not look right from my end...

2) You have incorrect code on your webpage e.g. hyperlink not implemented properly with the actual code displayed to users...

It's too painful to sit and wait with attempting to navigate through your different posts given the extremely long time it takes to load... Hence my biggest recommendation is for you to move webhosts ASAP!!!

Best of luck with your project and keep at it with the 90 day challenge ;-)
 

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Damn I've litterally just upgraded to a VPS at bluehost to speedup my site. I thought my home internet had a problem. That is not good.
 

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I went to review your website and it is still trying to load after 60 seconds... it finally came up. After that initial load it went quicker, but you definitely need to get that fixed.
 

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First thing is website redirected to http://www.helpthekid.com

I assume, this is the website, you wanted to be reviewd. Here are the things you need to work on

1) Get a logo
2) Remove donate button on floating top to somewhere near right side or somewhere else floating
3) Make a slider or slideshow to convey visitor what is your website about
4) header occupied too much space.. above the fold content is what people see. that is the first glance... So make sure, the message is conveyed at first glance.
5) put some pictures of founders here.. http://www.helpthekid.com/about/

I have more suggestions, but please work on these for now.. All the best, help the kids.. Thanks.
 

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Hi dlane1987, I took a long look at the content. On the homepage, it's not really clear why you have "kid" in quotes. It looks like you are trying to be a bit sarcastic here somehow, like maybe they are not really kids. But this would probably hurt your cause. If the kids are seen more as adults, they may seem old enough to take care of themselfs. Also on the homepage, I think it would be nicer to have your mission statement first before your executive summary. That way, if someone who wanted to donate came here first, they could quickly read what your abuot without getting lost in the details of your executive summary, etc. There is also one typo (an apostrophe on Kids' under "1.1 Aim"). I would also recommend calling this section "Aims" since there is more than one aim.

Some of the connections weren't always clear. For example, in the blog, what does the 3 Peaks challenge have to do with your Help the Kids? (Make this connection clear in the blog description so people have an idea _before_ clicking on the link.) Under "Help the Kids FAQ" and "Who are home-based educators", your table has been lost, possibly by copying and pasting it instead of formating it properly.

I saw in your gallery that you don't currently have any photos, but it would really help to add images throughout the site. And it might be useful to have an official logo if you plan on running this charity for a longer time. This will make your organization more recognizable and may make the purpose of the charity (education/home education) clearer since "Help the Kids" could mean all sorts of charitable assistance for kids.

That was a lot of criticism, but overall, I found the site to be really nice and the content to be written on a very professional level! Well done! --Katie, Marketing
 

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Since the date was back in 2015 when it was posted. The user has most likely abandoned this post and even the website. The user has either sold the domain or has simply redirected it to a new domain. The website looks like it's some local charity website maybe.
 
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